Taxi Sketch

Hi,

(Here is a radio guy trying radio a guy called Jeff in his cab and gets some unusual responses)

Taxi Sketch

Radio Guy:Hello 2424
(2424 is a code for a driver called Jeff)
Jeff: Who is that?
Radio Guy:You clown ! Who do you think I was calling Justin Bieber?
Jeff:I thought that radio thing was a mini tablet!
Radio Guy:What did you think it was a rolling stones CD?
Jeff:Yes
Radio Guy: A dumb dog would be better than you! He would know how to eat his dinner better than you!
Jeff: Well guess what I am a dog!

Guys,what did you think of that.Please provide some feedback thanks.

i David, I'm not sure about this mate, doesn't really feel complete yet? maybe try another few drafts?

I think it is a bit too short.

Do you think I should give up?

No don't give up, just keep at it. No one gets it perfect on the first time. So just keep refining. Know what the joke is and see it through.

Thanks,Gav for the feedback.

Anyway I have done my next sketch called Saucers.

I'm going to have another look at that one again.