Hi,
I have written a script for the pilot of a sitcom series. Before I submit to various production organisations I will like to get some feedback from this site.
The script is 30 pages long, so is too long to paste into this post. Instead, if anyone is will to offer feedback that will you please message me with an email address and I will email you the file.
In particular, I am looking for feedback in the following areas.
Whether the script flows
Whether the script makes sense
Whether the characters are consistent
Whether the jokes need tightening up
Whether there are gaps that need filling
Whether there is anything could do with removing
Plus any general feedback
I thank anyone for any help.
Gary
