Shame the critique section is rather dead these days :-(. Would be nice to see it busy again.
Here is my entry for this week's skit comp. Topic is Torture. Obviously the punch can be altered to suit 
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INT - FLAT
JOHN
What you doing?
ALAN
Watching snooker.
JOHN CASUALLY WALKS OVER TO THE WINDOW, STANDS ON THE LEDGE AND JUMPS.
EXT - SKYSCRAPER SIDE ON
WE SEE JOHN FALLING.
INT - FLAT
ALAN SWITCHES THE CHANNEL.
GEORGE ENTERS
GEORGE
What you doing?
ALAN
Watching darts.
GEORGE CASUALLY WALKS OVER TO THE WINDOW, STANDS ON THE LEDGE AND JUMPS.
EXT - SKYSCRAPER SIDE ON
WE SEE GEORGE FALLING.
INT - FLAT
ALAN SWITCHES THE CHANNEL.
ROBERT ENTERS
ROBERT
What you watching?
ALAN
Ahh, nothing. Just gonna grab something to eat.
ROBERT CASUALLY WALKS OVER TO THE WINDOW, STANDS ON THE LEDGE.
ALAN
What you doing!?! Awe come on. I said nothing. How can you justify jumping? That's not fair. That's shit Robert, that's really shit.
ROBERT
I've got cancer.
ALAN GETS UP ON THE LEDGE AND JUMPS.
EXT - SKYSCRAPER SIDE ON
WE SEE ALAN FALLING.
INT - FLAT
ROBERT HEADS OVER TO THE SOFA AND SITS DOWN
ROBERT
Amateurs.
HE SWITCHES ON THE T.V
(T.V. VOICEOVER)
And now on BBC 1 it's time for the second episode of 'The Wright Way'.
EXT - SKYSCRAPER SIDE ON
WE SEE ROBERT FALLING.
END.
