All webisodes, so far, now in one place
http://jokepit.co.uk/comedian/brett-andre
Thoughts, feedback and reaction are most welcome.
Not massively funny I can appreciate but, going to give it an alternating character in the back seat and more purpose as to why they are in a car for sooo long.
This is just a 'toe in the water' to gain some expert advice, feedback and suggestion.
Swinging the Lead :- http://youtu.be/n2piQNGSW54
Many thanks in advance.
Well, I liked it, but can't quite see where it's going to go from there. I don't see any need to explain why they're in the car, at least in that brief clip, as the dialogue was very entertaining. Amazing how the man on the right managed to talk without swallowing his chewing gum.
Thanks Beaky, where it will eventually lead is the the pair are 'working', like a stakeout, with a conclusion/result within an episode. During their work they have to keep each other focused and alert which, sometimes, can be funny or topical.
Feedback appreciated and taken on board, thanks.
All webisodes, so far, now in one place