Thoughts, feedback and reaction are most welcome.
Not massively funny I can appreciate but, going to give it an alternating character in the back seat and more purpose as to why they are in a car for sooo long.
This is just a 'toe in the water' to gain some expert advice, feedback and suggestion.
Swinging the Lead :- http://youtu.be/n2piQNGSW54
Many thanks in advance.