How to present a 'montage' scene in sitcom Page 2

So basically, the format I'm using is not that hot? Ok, I'll have another look at different types. As for the montage sequence, I think Bill has answered my question so thanks for all your input.

Your best bet is to try find out in advance who you might want to send it to and ASK them what format they prefer for submissions.

If there is more than one target company, choose the format preferred by most

Thanks Bill.