Feedback "The Quest"
Well done lads! keep writing and coming up with new ideas. Go to your local amateur dramatics group,if there is one and see if you can get people involved in your projects.
This way you can concentrate more on your writing/comedy and I think you will be on to a winner. Well done 
These are brilliant. Your writing is really good, like really good, suspiciously so. Please keep going, you have huge talents in the making here and your supporting cast members were great too and strangely enough, better actors that you two but that adds to the charm.