Comedy Sketch - Charity Appeal
Not bad, but the B&W charity ad parody has been done to death already; in fact we've seen at least a couple of examples on this forum in just the last few weeks.
Its unoriginal and you give the punch away in the first line
Your acting skills are good and do are your technical skills are good
Just do something about the writing and ideas
I mean if you'd BC wrong footed us into thinking he'd was BC epileptic it mouthy have been funnier