This was sound enjoyed it, only one tiny comment and its more personal than comprehensive but I would have gone with 'O Sugar' rather than 'Oh Bugger'.
The only reason being is that it put the picture of that old man that Paul Whitehouse used to do, he said 'oh bugger' every time so I got him in my head rather than Barry Chuckle.
If it was filmed that wouldn't be an issue though so its small spuds I suppose.