Don't bne disheartened the absolute worst stuff I write is stuff I write for my own pleasure.
It encourages self indulgence.
Quote: Tursiops @ January 6 2013, 1:31 PM GMTYou certainly can write, and while I know it is more work for you, you seem to have more success with more developed concepts, rather than with the one-gag groaners you have been serving up recently.
Nail on the head.
I like the animation I like all of your animations, I have even subscribed to your YouTube channel, I have watched all your videos and my 10 year old son has watched a few, and your writing is good, but it is not funny. You have told me the same in the past but you were a lot harsher.
I agree with others if you was to find somebody who could write funny you would be onto a winner because the animation work is faultless.
Quote: Tursiops @ January 6 2013, 1:31 PM GMTYou certainly can write, and while I know it is more work for you, you seem to have more success with more developed concepts, rather than with the one-gag groaners you have been serving up recently.
The thing is I like some groaners and it's fun for me to do them. I didn't see it as me being lazy (more likely it was me having a bad sense of humour). I want to work hard at this. I don't mind putting in extra hours.
But yes, the next sketch I animate will be different and will have a bit more in it. I want to learn from my mistakes.
Quote: Carlos Manwelly @ January 6 2013, 1:41 PM GMTI like the animation I like all of your animations, I have even subscribed to your YouTube channel, I have watched all your videos and my 10 year old son has watched a few, and your writing is good, but it is not funny. You have told me the same in the past but you were a lot harsher.
I agree with others if you was to find somebody who could write funny you would be onto a winner because the animation work is faultless.
Thanks for subscribing and I'm happy that your son has watched some of my videos.
Sometimes I can be a bit harsh and to-the-point with my criticism. Hopefully I helped in some way and if I didn't then my apologies.