The Elephant in the Room
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3MKoadT6xNc
Hope you enjoy. All comments,tweeting etc greatly appreciated
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The Elephant in the Room
Ironically it seems no one wants to talk about the elephant in the room!
Sorry I missed that its rather good I especially like how you didn't explain the punch but yeah very good
Could possibly trim vicars speech a little
I think if the joke is we suspect he's an arse then its proved
Quote: sootyj @ December 27 2012, 12:59 PM GMTSorry I missed that its rather good I especially like how you didn't explain the punch but yeah very good
Could possibly trim vicars speech a littleSorry
Thanks for the feedback!
It's also a good runner.
I could picture a follow up at a wedding, with a pregnant bride and the elephant answering when the vicar asks any objections.
Very impressed with your performance, your voice sounds assured and confident. The animation was ok, although a bit leaden. Unfortunately there weren't really any laughs to justify the length of the piece, and while the punch was ok, it felt out of place, and wasn't delivered quite well enough to tickle me. So in summary, you've got all the technical and performance qualities in place to deliver a better script.