WOMAN:I think Cheeky Vimto sounds nice.
MAN:Never...Harvey Wallbanger?
WOMAN:Nah...Tequila Sunrise?
MAN:Too sweet...Rob Roy?
WOMAN:Nah, I fancy something a bit different...Pink Lady.
MAN:I know...Jack Daniels.
WOMAN:Noooo....bloody Mary?
MAN:Nah...Whiskey Mac
WOMAN:Margarita.
MAN:Bud, Becks, Johnny Walker, Daiquiri, Tom Collins..
WOMAN
TOP! What makes you so sure Kate will have a boy anyway?
Nice concept. But I would rewrite as a quickie.
Two favourite names then punchline.
David's right. Cut it down as we can use it as a solid quickie.
Dan
Nice quickie here. I think cutting out the non-male names and trimming down a little and it's a nice little sketch. (I'd put in 4-5 rather than 2).
There you go, helpful contradictory advice!
I've left a few names in but shortened it down...
MAN: How about Jack Daniels?
WOMAN: Don't fancy that.
MAN: Bud, Becks, Harvey Wallbanger?
WOMAN: Hold on....what makes you so sure Kate will have a boy anyway?
I like shorts... but this is too short. I agree with Stephen M.
Cheers Badge, I know what you mean but I was reluctant to have more than four lines to make it a quickie so I'll leave it up to the team on the day to tamper as necessary if they want to use it.