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I've had a bit of modest success doing on line writing; content, press releases, sketches for rodeo clowns, jokes about roofs and now in production a book about poohing.

Modest enough success to think about taking a 6 month sabbatical from my day job and focus on actually doing some fun writing.

Any way if you're interested here's a blog on the subject by my good, if intemperate friend Dr Sardonicus.

deleted it, wasn't worth it in the end./

soots, my anti-virus software claims there is some sort of malware on your site. I don't really know what that means and why, but just thought I'd let you know and warn others.

bollocksthat's the lcw site, I shall warn the webmaster.

mean time here is the actual article.

deleted check it out on the blog if you really like.

Since you talk about getting presentation and spelling right it might be an idea to break the paragraphs up a little clearer and get someone to check it over for errors (there are a fair few).

It was nicely presented but the site kills that when you cut and paste.

I'll do it again.

Then someone else will find something else to criticise.

Tidy the flat. It gets messy again.

All is entropy.

Quote: sootyj @ November 2 2012, 1:27 PM GMT

It was nicely presented but the site kills that when you cut and paste.

I'm looking at it on your site. It would read way better if it wasn't one gigantic block of text. I know you've created a new line for paragraphs but a space between them will do wonders.

And now its double spaced you're wish is my command

Quote: sootyj @ November 2 2012, 1:35 PM GMT

And now its double spaced you're wish is my command

Great. Now get that spelling fixed!

EDIT: Also, I just checked and the paras aren't fixed in the slightest.

As I believe they foolishly said on Bloody Sunday

"sod the paras"

Just checked again and the whole thing is now a mess. I'd recommend going back to your original format rather than turning each sentence into two paragraphs.

Its perfectly readable for a blog post which is all it truly is.

It's not even a fupping critique post! Nay not even showcase, merely a posting on subject I thought would be of interest.

Quote: sootyj @ November 2 2012, 1:45 PM GMT

Its perfectly readable for a blog post which is all it truly is.

It's not even a fupping critique post! Nay not even showcase, merely a posting on subject I thought would be of interest.

Are we talking about the same article? I can only imagine we're seeing different things. Tell me I'm not crazy because what I'm looking at is madness!

**SCREENSHOT REMOVED**

It's not Madness there's no Suggs or nothing, it might be The Human League though

Good grief Bussell if this offends you so much I'll delete it.

Otherwise I'm just sharing a few thoughts, some friends asked me about.

Otherwise screenshots? Good grief like patriotism the last defence of a scoundrel.

Has he got any Up shots?

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