British Comedy Guide

Obviously

We see a wood paneled lounge with a large roaring fire and a dead woman on the rug.

We see two uniformed police officers with notebooks open standing over the body.

The constables begin to speak discreetly to each other

PC 1
"We have to go with the obvious, we have to!"

PC2
"But what will the sarge say? I mean it'll take at least six vans!"

PC1
"I know but what choice do we have?"

We see a line of at least forty men dressed in morning coats and side parted hair being put into police vans,

As the vans drive down a gravel path to the gate we see the sign

'The Hawthorns Academy for Butlers'

I like this, this is my kind of thing. Nice simple set up, good payoff.

Very nice :D

Like it!

:D

Nice one Teddy.

Good.

Thank you all for the feedback.

I liked this one as well

Thanks

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