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TIMELY NATION (new comedy group)
I watched your Care For the Community sketch for a minute and a half before losing interest. It just sort of rambled along without looking like it was going to come to a point. Suggest you set out your stall earlier and employ some judicious trimming.
Enjoyed the rabbit attack though.
Yup I gotta go with David you combine weakish over long scripts, with not so great technical skills and poor performances. Making this a wholly unenjoyable experience, akin to lunch at a poorly cleaned Wetherspoons pub with an unattractive and needy date.
I'd strongly reccomend writing a one page script. Ensuring there are 5 identifiable gags in it as well a beginning, middle and end.
Then consider filming it.
The Job Interview is excellent.
The Gentlemen's Lunch is OK but I didn't really get the point of Care for the Community. Nothing really happened.
keep it up, your all young, you got the technical skills to edit, just need some good sketches to work with