Hello,
A sketch based around the dramatic lives of the eastenders who feature in popular TV show, eastenders.
Please do have a look. Thanks!
(I've reposted this in Critique!)
Eastenders Sketch
I thought the writing was pretty good and the idea was quite funny. The first couple of sections could have done with a few laughs as it actually seemed like I was watching a soap opera rather than comedy. The only thing that bugged me was the location - didn't seem Albert Squareish.