Santa's Grotto

INT. SANTA'S GROTTO.

A LITTLE GIRL RUNS INTO THE GROTTO AND SITS ON SANTA'S LAP.

SANTA:
Hello, aren't you pretty? What's your name?

LITTLE GIRL:
I'm Angel, Santa.

SANTA:
Angel? That's a lovely name.

LITTLE GIRL:
Thank you Santa...I'm an angel of death and I've come for your soul.

LITTLE GIRL'S EYES TURN BLACK AND HER HEAD ROTATES 360 DEGREES CLOCKWISE A LA EXORCIST.

SANTA SHIVERS THEN GULPS. HE PULLS A WRAPPED GIFT FROM HIS SACK AND OPENS IT RAPIDLY.

SANTA:
Wh..wh...wh...what about Aquadoodle instead?

Not bad.

I think if she just said she was there for his soul you'd get there faster?

Ok Sootyj. Thanks for your comment.

Sorry its a good sketch and a neat joke, I just think it could be a touch faster

I could see it as a 3 panel cartoon strip

No probs dude. Have a good day.