Odd Hobby

We see two men on a motorway bridge; they are smoking cannabis and drinking from a bottle of vodka.

One man is holding a fishing rod over the bridge.

We hear the squeal of tyres below.

The man then starts reeling like mad as the rod bends under tremendous pressure.

We then see a motorcyclist in leathers and crash helmet being hauled over the bridge's rail by the other man.

The motor cyclist is then thrown to the floor and the man beats him to death with a stick.

We then see five other dead motorcyclists in a pile on the bridge.

The man with the rod speaks

MAN 1
"This is f**king hilarious"

That is a very funny idea.
But (and you're going to hate me) I think the ending is a cop out.
Just cut it out and have it purely visual.
But there 's something to be said for extending the joke - taking photos of each other holding the motorcyclists, chucking a tiny one back etc etc.
Sort of reminds me of the kind of thing The Goodies used to do -and I mean that in a nice way.

Thanks, I did actually have them taking photos as they said the punch I should have stuck with that.
By the way Lazzard I never take good advice badly.

I like this teddy yeah its a bit goodies but hey it made me laugh. now this is just a suggestion.the dudes on the bridge are smoking the poontang so it might be a good idea for them to reel a motor bike copper in, when they realize they instantly throw him back over the bridge.

You could have hit the nail on the head there Nigel!