There's a sequel buried in critique.
Mr Powers he won't buy flowers Page 2
I know
I preferred this one.
Oh the other one had vomit
Vomit is funny
Ok I'm sold
See you there
If you want my 10p, I prefer the other one, but both work. I like the running gag. Do you have you any more up your sleeve?
One more...
I have read all 3, this one's not bad... I like the title (cos Powers rhymes with flowers) and the premise of him doing anything to avoid buying flowers is a good one.