The camera work and the acting is seriously dodgy but I think the writing is ok, maybe:
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I don't normally watch the clips as I am more able to judge stuff at written level. But this was very good and very funny.
I thought the acting was good. Very funny idea and well executed. Love the line about poking the neighbour....
Well thanks for taking the time to look at it Teddy, I have always enjoyed writing sketches, but since YouTube came along I can't help not wanting to see the finished product in a video.
And Thanks Nick, the acting bit is my least favourite part of it all, so was nice of u to say the acting was good.