British Comedy Guide

Not The Foggiest

We see two Victorian police constables wearing capes and sporting handlebar moustaches standing on the corner of a street in heavy fog. They have stopped and have been listening to the sound of footsteps that appear to be following them.

Suddenly out of the fog comes a man dressed in a striped shirt and wearing an eye mask, he is carrying a bag with the words 'Swag' on it.

The two constables spot the man and then look at each other.

The man then attempts to call out to the two constables.

The two constables see this and quickly turn and run into the fog.

The man with the Swag bag looks lost as he gazes about in the fog.

We see the two constables standing at the door of an elaborate Georgian period house.

The door opens and a man dressed as Spiderman answers, we hear loud music and chatter as Spiderman speaks.

SPIDERMAN
"Welcome to the party lads, I'm glad you never brought that bore Terry Bruglar with you.

This is a lovely sketch idea, let down by a sledgehammer reveal. Funny stuff, play it as though it is and don't overexplain it.

As usual - great stuff from you Teddy.

The reveal could be cut right down to just Welcome to the party lads, I'm glad you never brought that bore Harris with you

I agree with you both and will do the subsequent amendments as I know they will enhance it.

thanks for the input.

I had an after thought on the actual name and think it adds volumes.

Good stuff Teddy, agree with the reveal comments. :D

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