British Comedy Guide

Ghost Train Quickie

INT. GHOST TRAIN.

A GHOST TRAIN FULL OF ADULTS AND KIDS GOES THROUGH THE DOORS AT THE START OF ITS JOURNEY.

FX: SCREAMS AS VARIOUS GHOSTS AND GHOULS APPEAR AND LIGHT UP THE DARKNESS.

THE GHOST TRAIN THEN COMES TO AN ABRUPT HALT IN THE DARK.

FX: KIDS BEGINNING TO SOB.

FX: LOUD MECHANICAL NOISE OF TRAIN TRACKS MOVING.

THE GHOST TRAIN STARTS MOVING AGAIN.

IT QUICKLY BOLTS THROUGH A SET OF DOUBLE DOORS INTO DAYLIGHT AND THE TRAIN DESCENDS DOWN A STEEP INCLINE VERY RAPIDLY.

THE GHOST TRAIN THEN DOES A LOOP THE LOOP.

Nice idea Nigel but I think it needs a big-head saying how not scared he is etc..

I like the way you think Nigel. Keep 'em coming dude :D

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