Adam's Apple Page 2

Quote: Lee @ July 20 2012, 2:09 AM BST

EXT. GARDEN OF EDEN

ADAM RUNS TOWARDS EVE WHO STANDS BY THE FORBIDDEN APPLE TREE, JUICING THE APPLES.

ADAM
Eve, what the heck are you doing?

EVE
I'm making apple juice.

ADAM
Why the hell aren't you making cider?

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I like this, I think it feels quite 'Big Train' ish in style. I laughed anyway.

(I didn't see the pre-edit version, don't know if that made a difference.)

Thanks, that's a great compliment!

The pre-edited version only lacks this part - "JUICING THE APPLES".

I thought it was ok, probably be better once made than on paper