Hello comedy lovers!

Hi there,

Tim Ewins, how are you all? I do stand up and have recently recorded the below video, and really I'm looking for feedback, suggestions of other peoples work to look at!

I can think of no other way of describing this than me doing a silly dance to a silly song!

http://bit.ly/LevjC1

Any tips or comments MORE than welcome as I intend to make more

Thanks

xxx

I like it. Nice punchline.
I think that you could improve the audio for the recording - a good mic would make it more professional.