Feature-Length, rather than a sitcom.
Edit: Full script offline, in attempt to shed 30 pages, and bring it down to a tighter 1-hour. Might post individual scenes occasionally for crit.
"On the Pull" scene from "Eraducation"
Might I suggest you take a plunger instead. 
By the way. Is there any way to change the thread title?
A plunger is used to remove filth from a blocked up lavatory, I was suggesting you clean this up young man. There is some extremely disgusting language in it.
I lasted a couple of pages. Your dialogue is horribly staccato, with lots of really obvious jokes and yucky offensive remarks.
Sorry but I gotta say go back to the beginning, design some characters and give them relationships.
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People say write about what you know, I am of the opinion that that is bollocks. Write about what everybody knows but hasn't seen it expressed that way before, or hasn't realised they knew it.