British Comedy Guide

A script I wrote and someone animated Page 2

I was responding to Stephen's question :)

Ironically.

It's about you being nettled by my critique then posting a reposte in poor taste

Gets out popcorn again.

Here, give us a slack handfull :)

If only I had £80 I could have afforded a witty one.

We'll leave it at that then

It's all right, but the voice is terrible.

I won't lie, I am, hypothetically, stoned, but I thought it was mesmerising and quaint and original. Nice.

I got about a minute in, but that voice was terrible and I had to turn off. Who on earth cast him? He sounds like something off Xtranormal, but with 1% more humanity.

I usually like this droll, dry kind of stuff. However, besides the the nice pictures, I wasn't sure it worked.

"Imagine hoping your wife had been sleeping around for the kids' sake" is a nice line though.

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