British Comedy Guide

A script I wrote and someone animated

Ahoy

I've been dicking about doing writing on elance for a while now.

And here is I believe the first thing anyone's filmed.

So go Sootyj!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pBkGcQLGyiM&feature=relmfu

It says you're one of two script editors, if you wrote it I'd ask for a writing credit as atm it seems Patrick wrote it.

meh he wrote the original I made it usable.

for a fee you can have what little dignity I have left

didja like the film its self?

:) Yeah, it wasn't bad. Could've used more pictures.

Nice drawings, very good funny observations on depression...I like the 'I have to hope my wife slept around to avoid genetic depression' take and the 'sucky life'.
The voice nearly put me to bloody sleep though.

Excelent as that was the one thing I had nothing to do with

I hope he films the other two

yay the other bit I had nothing to do with

I thought it was awful and ironically - very depressing. Couldn't make it all the way through. Sorry :(

Pictures were good though - and the script, obviously. The delivery made it a bit hard work, but I suppose it could be defended as 'in character'.

Quote: Shandonbelle @ June 30 2012, 11:56 AM BST

The voice nearly put me to bloody sleep though.

Quote: Stephen Goodlad @ June 30 2012, 11:57 AM BST

I thought it was awful and ironically - very depressing. Couldn't make it all the way through. Sorry :(

That's alright I felt the same way about that sex tape you and the missus had on rudetube.

Nice, is that supposed to be a joke?

Its a conundrum certainly.

what is?

Oi, I'm just sitting on the sidelines here with my popcorn! :)

still no idea what youre typing about

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