This is for Nick Rivers animation comp, but I liked these little fellas so much, I wanted some critique please 
INT. KITCHEN - DAY
A CAT AND DOG SIT STARING OUT OF THE WINDOW.
THEIR EYES WIDEN AT THE WONDERFULLY BIG WIDE WORLD BEFORE THEM.
DOG
Let's do it, let's escape.
CAT
Are you serious?
DOG
Yeah, come on, we will be free.
CAT
I'm already pretty free.
DOG
Are you, are you really?
CAT
Yeah, I'm a cat.
DOG
But are you really free or is it all just an illusion? Are you wearing that collar and bell because it looks cute or is it really a shackle a sign of repression?
CAT
It goes with my eyes.
DOG
You fool. If you escape you can be free. No more baths, vaccinations or kids pulling at your fur.
CAT
You're right, I can see what you mean, it's all becoming so clear now, let's go, let's be free.
OWNER (O.S)
Dinners ready!
DOG
Bugger it, I'm starving.
DOG LEAVES CAT STANDING THERE DEFLATED.
END
... thanks?
