Hello,
I've been checking out some of the scripts and sketches posted on here and it seems like a good place to go for an open and honest review of material.
This is the Pilot for a Comedy series I am writing called "Solomon's Ghosts" about a gang of inept Roadies on a disastrous European tour.
I'd be honored to know what you think...
Cheers.
Chadwick Merryweather
i've downloaded the PDF and will try to read at some stage soon.
Critiquing a whole pilot can be quite daunting.
Which is probably why you've had no response yet.
At least it's readable, which puts you in the top 10% already.
Thank you for that.
I did have doubts about putting the whole thing up or just a few pages but I figured letting people suckle from the milky goodness and then whipping away the teat was far crueler?
...and I got excited?
Thanks again.