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Feedback on my Dissertation wanted!

Hello! Newbie to posting here!

For my script-writing dissertation, I have written two episodes of a comedy series called 'Sister and Brother'.
A brief synopsis for you:
Tammy, a 25 year old 'More Trees in the City' campaigner from the city was enjoying her life. That was until her stuck-up brother Edward turned up on the doorstep.
He initially thinks that he has been kicked out by his wife just for one night after his redundancy, but he soon finds that his new bed is his sister's sofa. Coming down from his high life as a banker, proves difficult for him, as well as Tammy and her friends; Jess and Jack.

I thought that as I have been a fan of comedy for years now, that I should give it a go!

If anyone is interested in reading and giving feedback (don't worry, I'm not going to cry or throw a strop if you give a lot of negative feedback Rolling eyes ) and if you fancy appearing in my critical evaluation, then message me and I'll email the episodes to you!

Thanks for reading!

Wendy1989 Wave

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