Lemon-scented agony wipe

Howsy trousers.

I've already received some excellent criticism of part one of this series, now I'd like to offer up parts 2 & 3 for sacrifice. Don't worry, they're perfectly coherent in isolation. Ish.

I've posted these on various American forums and so far been greeted with a general sense of "say what?", so I'm keen to know it they find a more agreeable reception this side of the pond.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e_CIiCb9SgA

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=e0GNO1iPccA

Keep your dander up.

David

I love it. Unique.

David, I really love this. It's really original and watchable, funny and disturbing. Maybe try to make the voice slower and clearer. Otherwise it's wonderful! I also love the script - very well written. Is there a copyright issue with the images? Where were they from (you don't have to tell me!)?

Thank you both very much.

I've been told that the narration runs a little too briskly before, but then others have complained that it's too languid. Difficult to know who's right, so I'm going to trust my gut and assume you're all wrong.

This is where I'd deposit a smiley face if I was that sort of person.

The pictures are all courtesy of Google images, sourced painstakingly over many hours. I've thought about copyright issues before of course, but I decided to plough ahead regardless and wait for the first cease and desist. It's not like I'm making any money out of this, so I doubt anyone will be too offended.

Except maybe Lucozade.

You can use my pretty face whenever you like Hun.
You lucky bastard you.

Gormless bastard that I am, I just realised the links I gave you were to:

Episode 2, part one

and then, idiotically....

Episode 1

I have now amended it so the original links at the top now lead you to:

Episode 2, parts one and two

Just as the Goat God Mendingo intended.

I know, I know, I hate my very core. If you've one ounce of patience left for me I'd love to know how you feel about the concluding chapter of the episode.