Quote: Garry Lee @ April 18 2012, 2:01 AM BSTFor now, I'd just focus on removing all of those little specific character descriptions, as they suggest the script shouldn't be taken seriously. Those are jobs for a wardrobe designer and a casting director, not a script writer.
It depends what sort of description you put in, as obviously it can help give the reader an idea of character immediately; so things like- DAVID (Late Twenties, Smartly Dressed, severe haircut) and MARK (Late Twenties, Unkempt), serve to give the reader an immediate picture of the characters before they've even spoken.