A QUEUE OF PEOPLE ARE STANDING WAITING TO USE A CASH MACHINE
THE WOMAN AT THE MACHINE HAS BEEN STANDING THERE HUNCHED OVER FOR MINUTES, SHE SHOWS NO SIGN OF FINISHING HER TRANSACTION.
THERE ARE TUTS AND MUTTERINGS GOING ON THROUGHOUT THE QUEUE, THE MAN NEXT IN LINE GINGERLY STEPS FORWARD TILL HE'S RIGHT BEHIND THE WOMAN.
MAN
Sorry, but is everything all right?
WOMAN
Well, I was about to key in my pin... (SHE SWINGS AROUND....HER FACE IS A FEATURELESS OVAL)
But I just went blank.
Haha - like it.
But I did have to wonder if she was talking out of her arse!
Think better Lady has eye problems, wearing sunglasses, or hat over her head?.
Very funny - could be a little surreal or spooky - but it definitely would get a laugh.
Like it a lot Shandonbelle. Could be a good special effects series, with stuff like 'on the tip of my tongue' etc
Cheers for comments guys 
Quote: AJGO @ January 31 2012, 12:48 PM GMT
May well 'borrow' that idea if that's ok AJGO??!
Absolutely dear
I quite liked it, it was nicely odd and quirky.
This is great. Loved it! Very strange, I like strange.