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Diarrhoea boy - part of short story/sketch
What is this?
Is it a sitcom? a short film script? a sketch?
You are going to put people off right from the start with your bad spelling and grammar. It really jangles with the reader.
OK spelling is bad and grammer , im not sending it to anyone or anything . iv always been into comedy and was just seeing if I could write . its more a short story . it was gonna be a sketch
Have to be honest it ain't working.
Comedy is all about surprise and this is unsurprising, over long and cliched.
There's nothing very much original or eye catching in it.
Spelling and grammer can easily be fixed . iv heard of spell check . more interested in content . thanks for replies.
As a person with dyspraxia; I've learned the hard way that bad spelling and grammar, is generally viewed as being a bit contemptuos.
And especially with a script as poorly written as this one, you really need to raise your overall game.
sootyj your sketches are really gud ............
i ment there not really good .
Quote: Scott Dexter @ January 26 2012, 2:07 PM GMTcheese dick
I can't fault the spelling but it left a bit of a sour taste in my mouth.
Quote: Scott Dexter @ January 26 2012, 2:40 PM GMTsootyj your sketches are really gud ............
i ment there not really good .
In which case I shall leave you to your own artistic journey.