BUNNY POO SALAD episode 5 - now online
Right first of all your sketches are way too long.
Except the one with the pervy interviewer I liked that.
You're picking on too obvious targets' dodgy cancer cures, day time TV all too easy.
The shakesperean drinkers were ok, but c'mon at 3 minutes the barrel is well scraped.
Write shorter, neater and more surprising.
Albeit top notch production values and performances.
(hello sailer voice) "OoooOOOOooooh, he's not keen on length!!" (giggles behind hand)
Seriously, thanks for the feedback.
Daytime TV... yeah, I suppose (only one more of those to come.)
Wasn't aware of anyone else's attempts to cure cancer, though.
More the bullshit cure thing, been there.
I think if you cut the whole show back to 10 minutes and kept your skits to 1-2 minutes you might have more fun.
Just saying is all...
Of course you could always film the brilliant sitcom trailer I wrote about a man with 2 cocks...