What up, peep holes?
I haven't posted here before. I am all aquiver.
Up until now I've stuck strictly to writing scripts but, frustrated at a lack of progress, decided to quit pouting on the sidelines and produce something a bit more tangible. Something with pictures and sounds. You know, like a movie.
Anyway, I'd appreciate hugely if you'd spend ten minutes to take a look and let me know what you think.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GFDz1siI4Aw
Mucho kudo,
David
Hi David and welcome
I loved it! Great concept, really original and the music worked well too.
And I like your imaginary friend!
Thank you very much, miss, you are a striking and fragrant individual.
Welcome David - I liked it and it was extremely well put together. But I think it was a bit too long. I gave up after about 5 minutes.
Maybe do them in smaller chunks.
I liked it... but I agree it could have been a little shorter. I would have preferred a bit less of a literal match between VO and imagary too... but overall, nicely done!
Thanks for taking the time, guys, much appreciated.
A failure to hold interest seems to be the biggest criticism I'm getting, so, taking the above comments into account, I decided to distill part one down to five minutes to see how it plays.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OQVlTfzMfwE
If anyone still has the heart I'd be interested to hear if this experiment is an improvement.
I enjoyed and gave it the full 5 stars.
Happy to hear you enjoyed the re-edit.
I'd be interested to know how people feel about parts two and three, which I think are the stronger episodes. You can watch them here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mdCaafhBnok
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e0GNO1iPccA
Be warned, they are a touch gruesome, but from what I'm seeing elsewhere on the forum, I don't see that being a problem.
Mad love,
David