Ikea

Gone

There's a very solid idea in here and it's a good one. I especially like the bitter ending. Funny.

But the intro is superfluos and the final speach drags abit. I reckon the whole thing will work very nicely if done silently.

I really like the idea and there are a lot of good points to it. I feel it drags a little in the middle with the picking up chips and such. I think that section could be cut down and made a bit snappier but all in all I thought it was very good and anyone who has been to ikea can relate.