Sitcom Trails 2013 Votes:
Bookmobile - good mix of characters and ages but not enough gags - No
Donnies Appraisel - Maybe
I felt that I could relate to the characters as I have worked in this kind of environment before. There were some funny bits but other parts were 'run of the mill' office humour which one could hear on a daily basis in the work environment.
Turbulence - Yes
I did laugh out loud a number of times which I haven't done in some of the other scripts I read. This is of course the main point of the sitcom but the story was engaging as well. I part where they look at each other whilst Roger is wearing the glasses is quality.
Shhuusshh! - Maybe
I like the weird characters which may not suit all tastes but I thought they seemed to work. Cliffhanger didn't work for me though
2-1 -Yes
I quite liked this, the characters were easy to relate to and although the story lost me towards the end there were a couple of good jokes in there