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Need help writing!
What sort of money are we talking, Thomas?
I am currently studying at college and have no money at all, so I couldn't afford to pay.Which is unfortunate as I would really like someone on board to help me with the wirting side. But any advice you have would be great?
Start writing it.
Yes, but if I start writing it won't be as good as I want it to be, my writing skills won't do it enough justice, I would like to be given some advice or even take someone onboard to help but I know with no money this will be difficult.
Quote: Thomas Barber @ December 7 2011, 10:57 AM GMTYes, but if I start writing it won't be as good as I want it to be, my writing skills won't do it enough justice
The more you write, the better you'll get. As Confucius said, a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.
Quote: Thomas Barber @ December 7 2011, 10:57 AM GMTYes, but if I start writing it won't be as good as I want it to be, my writing skills won't do it enough justice, I would like to be given some advice or even take someone onboard to help but I know with no money this will be difficult.
How do you know it won't be as good as you want it to be?
Whatever anyone writes isn't as good as they want it to be straight away.
Write it...if you aren't happy re-write it and again and again til it is.
Nobody else can write it as you want it to be...it's your story.
I guess your right, thanks for the advice. Can I ask your opinoin on my idea, what do you think of it?
It's not at all important what people on here think about it. What do YOU think about it?
I personally think it is a good idea, even more so that is really based around my life so I know most of the story. But it would be nice to hear other peoples opinion on this?
Quote: rwayne @ December 7 2011, 11:03 AM GMTIt's not at all important what people on here think about it.
You're nearly right. 
Chipolata can I ask your opinion on this please?, I would really appreciate some feedback on this, negative or positive.
Quote: Thomas Barber @ December 7 2011, 11:05 AM GMTI personally think it is a good idea, even more so that is really based around my life so I know most of the story. But it would be nice to hear other peoples opinion on this?
If you have a passion for it - write it. There isn't anyone one here or anywhere else that can write it as you will. If you think it's worth writing then it definitely is.
Ok, thanks for the advice. sorry to keep asking questions but, what do you think to the general idea,is it something that would intrest you if it was on Television right now?
Quote: Thomas Barber @ December 7 2011, 11:07 AM GMTChipolata can I ask your opinion on this please?, I would really appreciate some feedback on this, negative or positive.
I think the synopsis you outline is too predictable. Even with that brief outline I knew where it was going to end. How about subverting the idea more and bouncing the story off in an unexpected direction? I don't know how, that's up to you.