A few sketches by The Darkly Show
Some feedback would be nice...
I like the bad taste Hitler reference.
I laughed. Very good!
HA! I thought that was very good. The acting was slightly over the top at the end I felt, but, yes, I enjoyed it.
cheers for the feedback so far...
When you're editing, think about pace more, it defines how the audience views the piece, it watches quite sluggishly.
You've obviously put some thought into how you're filming this and it shows...but I think you need to work a bit harder on the build up. i.e. why are you following the bloke sitting at home, which in uninteresting and dry, when the main character is "door to door hitler"? You could do much more to build this character, try and get a bit of music in there too, adds a huge amount... at the moment the first 45 seconds are pointless.
There's something in this conceptually, but it needs more thought, it isn't really making me laugh at the moment, but that's not to say it's not a good effort. Well done for getting something out there.
Thanks comedyoflife. Will take your comments on board.
Enjoyed this
However, for me, the reveal of the book was what amused. Nothing after.