British Comedy Guide

Twos Up

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INT.LIVING ROOM OF APARTMENT. NIGHT.

JENNA, ANITA AND JOHN ARE HAVING A DRINK AT THE GIRLS’ FLAT. THE GIRLS ARE IN A FLIRTY, GIGGLY MOOD.

JENNA: Thanks for the evening.

ANITA: It’s been really great.

JOHN: It was my pleasure. Anytime.

JENNA: Look, we would like to show you how much we appreciate spending time with us.

JOHN: What?

ANITA: You know? We would like to do something together. You can just watch us.

JOHN: You mean…

JENNA: Yes. We’d like to put on a bit of a show for you. Just sit back and relax while we get ready.

THE GIRLS SLINK OFF TO GET READY.

JOHN: (To himself) Here we f**king go!

JOHN STRIPS DOWN TO HIS Y FRONTS.

GIRLS RE ENTER WITH ACOUSTIC GUITARS AND BEGIN TO SING “STREETS OF LONDON”. THEY FINISH.

JENNA: Thank you. This one’s called A Horse with No Name. We hope you like it.

ANITA: (To John) Do you want me to turn the fire off?

Lol I liked this one WJFK. I imagine it though as the girls doing really heartfelt renditions, really over the top you know? Without such a delivery, in my mind it could be a bit 'meh'. But in my head and the way I saw it made me laugh so it's all down to execution.

I'll add to that, well done. I liked.

Yes, I like it. Made me smile and then I saw the twist and smiled for a completely different reason.

Very very very fantastic.
Yet again.
Bastard.

This is very professional and neat.

The last line is perfect as well.

Impressed.

Thaks for your comments. Tom, I agree with you. I imagined the girls really sincerely singing.

That's the one! That would really make the sketch.

Yeah I liked it... saw where the sketch was going but "Do you want me to turn the fire off?" was a great finishing line.

Loved it and a great ending too.

Nice WJFK and well rounded off.

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