Hi all,
Wouldn't mind some feedback on this as it's a new character that I'm developing.
Character Comedy
Hi,
I had a quick scan through and thought it was pretty good although it does need work as it was a bit thin on jokes but, that will come as you develop the character and find his voice I guess??
It was a good effort and I particularly enjoyed the old peoples home bit especially where you referenced senility. Keep up the good work.
Jason.