On The End Of Your Nose (Cartoon)

Hi All

New cartoon of mine: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vL5leNQ1CX8 . Do rip it to shreds. Any comments on the script, look, animation, voices (are the voices clear enough? I wasn't sure), the music and anything else would be fab.

Oh, and some music I've made: http://soundcloud.com/yacob83/music-for-character-2 and http://soundcloud.com/yacob83/music-for-character-3 . If anyone wants to comment/critique either track I'd be really grateful (the music isn't comedic).

Cheers
Yacob

Hello again Stuart. Given that you have the limitless possibilities of animation at your disposal I'd have changed the structure slightly...

It's fine as a minimalist set-up too but personally I'd never choose animating lip sync over making a guy push off his own head

I like the characters and good animations, voices are cool too, I watched a few of your videos laughed at the bungee jump one

Cheers guys!

Like the style in yours, Eggie. Would be nice if my cartoons were more cartoon-y in style. I'll have to practice my drawing. The getting rid of the head at the end seems like a good idea (not that I can do it because it's your idea).

Not really, it's all suggested by your initial idea. I just went a tiiiny bit further