Removed as the gloves are shabby and the fox is very fashion conscious.
Foxing Gloves episode 2 (5 mins)
Mad, bizarre, quirky and involving. It has a spoofish feel to it, like Sherlock and Watson on the laughing gas.
Maybe some of the weird phrases and imagery, though clever and imaginative, could be cut down, and be replaced with more character led stuff.
I can see Nash and Logan in my minds eye, just feel you may be relying too much on the bizarre stuff at the expense of fleshing out the two guys a bit more.
Really liking this saga though.
Quote: Shandonbelle @ October 31 2011, 12:08 AM BSTMad, bizarre, quirky and involving. It has a spoofish feel to it, like Sherlock and Watson on the laughing gas.
Maybe some of the weird phrases and imagery, though clever and imaginative, could be cut down, and be replaced with more character led stuff.
I can see Nash and Logan in my minds eye, just feel you may be relying too much on the bizarre stuff at the expense of fleshing out the two guys a bit more.
Really liking this saga though.
Some nice points there and well made. I suppose for me the joke is primary and then I try and work some sort of an engaging story around the jokes. I think Logan and Nash are definitely two distinct characters but maybe for me the jokes take precidence.