Ha, class as always, beyond the minor continuity tardis thing, it's spot on. The frames were nothing seems to be happening benefit the strip because watching someone "think" in a strip adds a beat that helps the joke. The final frame contains a few jokes rolled into one, the best one for me being a comment on the poseur nature of bands.
Might it be best as one frame, not connected to Newmans, with a group of Kiss style Silence members with the Sony exec asking something about them just posing? Maybe place for a gag about them just miming their songs?
Does the girl have anything to do with the band?
Is it a band she wants to start or a band she's a fan of or neither?
Cheers guys,
As alway cheers Jack very kind
Good Idea Corey Could just be a single panel CD cover for their greatest hits etc, like that.
Steve she doesn't want to start band it's just her now associating the villain with a band so doesn't find it scary anymore.
Yeh think this was a bit of a bust all in all, will get better next time I promise!