I read all the build up and was expecting a bit more of a punch line than I got. Honestly, the lead in is great but the end kills it dead. It feels very flat.
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Quote: Baumski @ June 25, 2007, 11:58 AMPut this sketch in the right comedic environment like 'Smack the Pony' and I think it would work beautifully.
I like the idea of breasts. That swung it for me. But it is very similar to teh thong sketch in Smack The Pony already. However, depending on a producers' angle, take on things and knowledge of the industry, this may sell.
Especially if he's the man at the desk.