Loved it when M&S rang. Different endings whizzing through my head but pony stuck on escalator was brilliant!
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Nice funny piece there, I love the idea of the wandering pony aspect of it. The call from M&S works really well at the end. Maybe the pony could be in the ladies changing room refusing to budge till one of the Mrs Slocombe types measures him up.
I didn't notice the straw on first viewing but perhaps it is worth cropping out. Also on re-watching I liked that he looked for the Pony under his cushion 
This is an annoying reshoot suggestion but I like the idea so I'm going to say it dagnammit!
What might have been funny is if the phone call was from the distressed Pony saying he's stuck in M+S. And we could just hear faint hee-hawing coming from down the phoneline as he explains his predicament.
Quote: ShoePie @ September 21 2011, 6:16 PM BSTWhat might have been funny is if the phone call was from the distressed Pony saying he's stuck in M+S. And we could just hear faint hee-hawing coming from down the phoneline as he explains his predicament.
This confuses me.
Thanks for the alternative ending ideas but this isn't such a flawed masterpiece that I'd go back for re-shoots. I will tinker with the edit and post it back up though.