EXT. PARK. DAY. TWO WORKMEN HOLDING SPADES AND SHOVELS AND WEARING HIGH-VISIBILITY OUTFITS ARE STANDING TALKING.
WORKMAN 1:
You know that new bloke that's started?
WORKMAN 2:
Yeah, I think he's called Dave. What about him?
WORKMAN 1:
He's gay.
WORKMAN 2:
Gay? How do you know?
WORKMAN 1:
Look.
CAMERA PANS TO THIRD WORKMAN WHO IS WEARING HIGH-VISIBILITY TROUSERS WITH THE ARSE CUT OUT OF THEM.
Th pace and set-up is good but personally feel a bit uncomfortable with the leap to arse out signifying gay. Is there more of a twist you could have, like
WORKMAN 1:
He's gay.
WORKMAN 2:
Gay? Really? How do you know?
WORKMAN 1:
Slept with him last night
or something unexpected for your characters?
If you wanted to go really stereotypical, maybe a play on the builder/other outfits from village people, and them trialling the most appropriate one for a building site?
Cheers AJGO.
Yeah, it's definitely not a PC sketch. I might try and do something like it but using photoshop and speech bubbles as it's more of a visual gag.
I liked your 'slept with him last night' one though. 