SCENE : Man walks up to a reception desk in a conference centre.
MAN: Hi, I'm er here for the Prevent Premature Ejaculation Taking Over Your Life seminar.
RECEPTIONIST STUDIES HER LIST OF SEMINARS.
RECEPTIONIST: I'm sorry sir, you've come too early. That one's tomorrow.
Great idea, but doesn't need as many words-
'I'm here for the premature ejaculation seminar'
'Sorry, you've come too early'
Quote: DarrenF1970 @ September 11 2011, 2:09 PM BSTSCENE : Man walks up to a reception desk in a conference centre.
MAN: Hi, I'm er here for the Prevent Premature Ejaculation Taking Over Your Life seminar.
RECEPTIONIST STUDIES HER LIST OF SEMINARS.
RECEPTIONIST: I'm sorry sir, you've come too early. That one's tomorrow.
Very neat.
But could be as little as
PATIENT
Dr I've got premature ejacultion
DR
You've come to early.
Thanks, I agree the first effort was a bit wordy...
Making the 'Premature ejaculation' bit a big sign at the registration desk would make it a deal less wordy (shit on radio, though).
Great gag.
Ajgo has edited it perfectly for you.