Me doing Stand Up

Very new to the game and reluctant to be filmed but since I value your opinions:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4GwF3awpzaU

Any feedback welcome.

I thought you had a good, confident presence, your delivery was fine, and you just need more work on your material.

FOF can be a tough room, so well done on playing there.

I was about to point out that delivering your set standing on the wall can be disorientating for the audience before I realised it was your camera man at fault.

For a new act you deliver your act with confidence and flair. Your punchlines don't always land but they can always be reworked over time. Keep at it, my lad!

Thanks for the feedback!